我想表达"家长应该让孩子全面发展不仅仅体现在知识上还要在适应社会上".这样翻译可以吗?谢谢

为什么要加because呢？可以把because去掉呀。然后ask for children 改为ask children for。后面两个动词get和adapt改为getting 和 adapting.

Parents should ask children for overall development,not only getting good book knowledge,but also adapting to the real society.

呵呵，我的理解，望能提供参考作用。

Parents should suggest children develop in all ways not only getting more knowledge but also shall be adapted to the society.

Parents should pursue the across-the-aboard development of their children and equip them with academic knowledge and the skills to adapt themselves to the real society as well.